2004 - Revision history

Jane at 16:22, 27 March 2016

2016-03-27T16:22:55Z

Jane: /* Demographics */

2016-01-25T23:16:17Z

Demographics

Jane: /* Demographics */

2016-01-23T21:21:21Z

Demographics

Jane: /* Game */

2015-12-28T18:51:14Z

Game

Jane: /* FIRST Robotics Competition */

2015-12-28T18:12:13Z

FIRST Robotics Competition

Jane: /* FIRST Robotics Competition */

2015-12-28T18:11:27Z

FIRST Robotics Competition

Paul: Grammar correction; sentence fluency

2010-09-20T22:23:07Z

Grammar correction; sentence fluency

Tanner: Text replace - ' we ' to 'the team'

2010-05-24T12:21:20Z

Text replace - ' we ' to 'the team'

Tanner: /* Members */ Change SMW to template version.

2010-05-05T23:05:49Z

Members: Change SMW to template version.

Tanner: /* Robots */ Add link to robot.

2010-04-22T13:50:46Z

Robots: Add link to robot.

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 {{yearBar}}
-In this year, the Robolions participated in [[FIRST Robotics Competition|FRC]].
+In this year, the Robo Lions participated in [[FIRST Robotics Competition|FRC]].
-[[File:2004_TeamPicture.jpg|300px|thumb|right|The Robolions in their first year]]
+[[File:2004_TeamPicture.jpg|300px|thumb|right|The Robo Lions in their first year]]
 ==Officers==

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 *Number of Mentors: {{#ask:[[mentor in year::2004]] | format=count}} (Recorded ##)
 *Number of Freshmen: {{#ask:[[Freshman in year::2004]][[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}}
-*Number of Sophomores: {{#ask:[[Sophmore in year::2004]][[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}}
+*Number of Sophomores: {{#ask:[[Sophomore in year::2004]][[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}}
 *Number of Juniors: {{#ask:[[Junior in year::2004]][[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}}
 *Number of Seniors: {{#ask:[[Senior in year::2004]][[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}}

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 ==Demographics==
-*Number of Members: {{#ask:[[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}} (Recorded ##)
+*Number of Members: {{#ask:[[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}}
-*Number of Female Members: {{#ask:[[member of robotics in year::2004]] [[gender::female]] | format=count}} (Recorded ##)
+*Number of Female Members: {{#ask:[[member of robotics in year::2004]] [[gender::female]] | format=count}}
-*Number of Male Members: {{#ask:[[member of robotics in year::2004]] [[gender::male]] | format=count}} (Recorded ##)
+*Number of Male Members: {{#ask:[[member of robotics in year::2004]] [[gender::male]] | format=count}}
 *Number of Mentors: {{#ask:[[mentor in year::2004]] | format=count}} (Recorded ##)
-*Number of Freshmen: {{#ask:[[Freshman in year::2004]][[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}} (Recorded ##)
+*Number of Freshmen: {{#ask:[[Freshman in year::2004]][[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}}
-*Number of Sophomores: {{#ask:[[Sophmore in year::2004]][[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}} (Recorded ##)
+*Number of Sophomores: {{#ask:[[Sophmore in year::2004]][[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}}
-*Number of Juniors: {{#ask:[[Junior in year::2004]][[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}} (Recorded ##)
+*Number of Juniors: {{#ask:[[Junior in year::2004]][[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}}
-*Number of Seniors: {{#ask:[[Senior in year::2004]][[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}} (Recorded ##)
+*Number of Seniors: {{#ask:[[Senior in year::2004]][[member of robotics in year::2004]] | format=count}}
 ==Members==

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 ==FIRST Robotics Competition==
 ===Game===
-The game for 2004 was [[Raising the Bar: FIRST Frenzy 2004 | Raising the Bar: FIRST Frenzy]].
+The game for 2004 was [[ 2004 Raising the Bar: FIRST Frenzy| Raising the Bar: FIRST Frenzy]].
 ===Robots===

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 ==FIRST Robotics Competition==
 ===Game===
-The game for 2004 was [[Raising The Bar: FIRST Frenzy 2004 | Raising the Bar: FIRST Frenzy]].
+The game for 2004 was [[Raising the Bar: FIRST Frenzy 2004 | Raising the Bar: FIRST Frenzy]].
 ===Robots===

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 ==FIRST Robotics Competition==
 ===Game===
-This year's game was [[Raising The Bar: FIRST Frenzy]].
+The game for 2004 was [[Raising The Bar: FIRST Frenzy]].
 ===Robots===
 As this was our first year, the team was happy to build a working robot - [[Unnamed Robot]].
-Although the arm proved quite frail and the robot failed to prove very effective at the game, but this year provided many lessons for years to come.
+The robot was not effective in the game due to the fragility of the arm.
 ===Field Team===
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 ===Regionals===
-In 2004,the teamonly attended the [[Peachtree Regional]].
+In 2004, the team only attended the [[Peachtree Regional]].
 ====Peachtree Regional====
-At the [[Peachtree Regional]], the arm on the robot proved to be quite frail and the robot failed to be effective at playing the game. Though this first year proved to teach the team a lot of lessons for years to come.
+The robot was not effective in the game at the [[Peachtree Regional]] due to the fragility of the arm; however, this preliminary year taught the team many lessons for future games.
 The team ended up ranking 43rd out of 46 teams with a win-loss-tie ratio of 1-6-1.<ref>[http://www2.usfirst.org/2004comp/events/GA/rankings.html Official FIRST 2004 Peachtree Rankings]</ref>
 ===Awards===
-In 2004,the teamdidn't win any awards.
+The team did not win any awards.
 ==Sponsors==

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 ==Members==
-{{#ask:[[member of robotics in year::2004]]
+{{memberList|year=2004}}
 ==References==